I Sing the Battle
By Harry
Kemp
I SING the song
of the great clean guns that belch forth death at will.
"Ah, but
the wailing mothers, the lifeless forms and still!"
I sing the song
of the billowing flags, the bugles that cry before.
"Ah, but
the skeletons flapping rags, the lips that speak no more!"
I sing the
clash of bayonets, of sabres that flash and cleave.
"And wilt
thou sing the maimed ones, too, that go with pinnedup sleeve?"
I sing
acclaimed generals that bring the victory home.
"Ah, but
the broken bodies that drip like honey-comb!"
I sing of hosts
triumphant, long ranks of marching men.
"And wilt
thou sing the shadowy hosts that never march again?"
What makes it a poem
What makes different poetry from other genres is the
way sentences are organized, when writing a poem it is necessary to write
several verses in stanzas. The main idea of a poem is to express feelings by
using different figurative language that catches the audience’s attention. There
are several techniques of figurative language: onomatopoeia, alliteration,
hyperbole, metaphor, simile, idioms and personification. A good poem must have
at least one or two of these.
In the “I sing the battle” by Harry Kemp’s case, we
can find three of them: personification, simile and alliteration.
PERSONIFICATION: “great clean guns that belch forth death at will.” This verse is an
example of personification because the author presents the guns as beings that
can belch, action that does not happen in real life. The same case with “the bugles that cry before.” In this
case bugles can cry but it does not happen in real life. The author puts in
this way in order to catch audience’s attention by showing how difficult the
battle is.
SIMILE: "Ah,
but the broken bodies that drip like honey-comb!" in this case, the
other uses like in order to compare
the broken bodies with the honey-comp, referring to the blood from those
bodies.
ALLITERATION: “I
SING the song, broken bodies, marching men.” The author repeats the initial
letters in these verses, considered as a poetic device to catch audience’s
attention.
This poem by Kemp is a
clear example of what makes poetry; it has several elements that are important
when inspiring ourselves writing verses.
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